Sunday, October 21, 2012

Spare Me The Horror~

Sorry, removed for further editing. I seriously suck at it, so do not hold your breath :p




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83 comments:

  1. Privy TriflesOctober 18, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    Ewwww that was eerie... :/

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  2. Rahul BhatiaOctober 18, 2012 at 3:09 PM

    Very well written and creepy, Ghazala:)

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  3. UnknownOctober 18, 2012 at 4:10 PM

    I was pretty horrified.

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  4. IndraniOctober 18, 2012 at 4:29 PM

    Good one.
    Well written.
    So glad you woke up from the dream.

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:53 PM

      Indrani dear,

      This is fiction and in the story it actually happens. Thanks :)

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  5. C SureshOctober 18, 2012 at 4:39 PM

    Horror, now, Ghazala! Well done!

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:54 PM

      Suresh,

      Try writing one too. I would love to read. Thanks and happy halloween :)

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  6. magiceyeOctober 18, 2012 at 4:42 PM

    That was brilliantly scary Ghazala! Phew...

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  7. RaghavOctober 18, 2012 at 6:15 PM

    Scaaaary... The photos didn't help either, I'm going to have nightmares now :-)

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:55 PM

      She will come for you tonite..! LOL
      Kidding and happy Halloween :)

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  8. TTTOctober 18, 2012 at 7:15 PM

    scary !!!! i guess I am reading horror for the first time on your blog ..well done !!!!

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:56 PM

      Hi TTT,

      I have written a few on my dotty's request. She is a big Halloween fan. Thanks :)

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  9. Rajni SinhaOctober 18, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    yes ghazala this one is eerie and scary

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  10. Yolanda RenéeOctober 19, 2012 at 4:00 AM

    Ghazala,

    Frightening! Did you have the photo's before the story? Did it inspire you? Or a nightmare? Just curious.
    Well told. The stress of moving, childbirth, life and death. Excellent visuals.
    Happy Halloween! I'll post mine after midnight.

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:51 PM

      Dear Yolanda,
      I am use to this question. I have had many asking me if I selected the picture first or wrote the post. Well, I always write first and look for a picture to fit the bill. And usually i find what i am looking for, thanks to Google:)
      This is an old post of mine, which i wrote long back. This was a two part story but I had to chop it down for RFW. Thank you for your visit ~

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  11. Akshay Kumar GOctober 19, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    That was a scary tale, I can only imagine your mindset at that time. Phew! This post reminded me of a Japanese horror movie called, Dark Water.

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  12. D.NambiarOctober 19, 2012 at 9:21 AM

    Ghazala. That was gripping!
    Good job, yeah!

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  13. PanchaliOctober 19, 2012 at 10:47 AM

    Ewww..that was creepy,ghaz. The scary visuals are still playing in my mind. It felt like watching ..'The Omen' where a child to steer humankind to hell takes birth! Great job.
    I loved it!!

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:59 PM

      Dear Di,

      Omen is classic, this is just a fraction of it. thank you and I am glad I scared you, happy halloween :)

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  14. ArjunaUbachaOctober 19, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    Well written. When I started reading I thought you had a baby. :) Then the realisation dawned.... This is better than Ram Gopal Varma's script.

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 7:00 PM

      Dear IW,

      Thank you so much, I loved your feedback. Happy Halloween :D

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  15. BikramOctober 19, 2012 at 2:40 PM

    Now that scared me too..

    Happy halloween to you.. Copywright it you never know who is going to steal the idea ..

    Bikram's

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    1. UnknownOctober 19, 2012 at 6:46 PM

      Hi Bikram,

      How do i copyright it? Please help.
      And I am glad I scared you..!
      Happy Halloween :)

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  16. Suhas NaikOctober 19, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    You have been excellent with every kind of topic that you have been writing about and now this one is a very good horrifying script.

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:37 AM

      Hi Suhas,

      Thank you for your kind words. It makes me happy to know, you feel that way. I try :)

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  17. the little princessOctober 19, 2012 at 5:50 PM

    creepy creepy creepy.....meri raaton ki neend uda di aapne!! scary as hell!!! wonderfully written!

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:38 AM

      Dear Lil princess,

      Happy Halloween..! Enjoy the spook and stay chill. Thanks :)

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  18. indu chhibberOctober 19, 2012 at 7:25 PM

    This was really spooky,you bring everything alive in front of my eyes.

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:39 AM

      Dear Indu,

      This was a longer story, I would have liked to scare you a little more. Thanks and happy halloween :)

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  19. SallyOctober 19, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    I agree with your other commentators, very scary but I am so glad everything went well with the birth of the baby (or did it) do you have a sequel in mind?

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:42 AM

      Dear Sally,

      The ghost has gifted the baby so all is not well with the baby..LOL

      Sequel? This was written as two parts but I clubbed everything together and edited out quite a bit. Thanks and happy Halloween :)

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  20. SandyOctober 19, 2012 at 10:01 PM

    Loved it....I hope it never happens for real though :P

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:42 AM

      Dear Sandy,

      OMG, if happens in real, I would not know where to run to..hee hee

      Thank for reading and happy Halloween :)

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  21. SandyOctober 19, 2012 at 10:01 PM

    Excellent...I hope it never happens though :P

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  22. NirvanaOctober 19, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    Oh my God!! that was a really scary one! and how on earth did you find such an apt pic? Superb piece of writing there!!

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:45 AM

      Dear Nirvana,

      I have always managed to find pictures that fit my stories. Yes, sometime I do add couple of line to my stories to make the picture more suitable. But I usually write first.

      Thank you and Happy halloween :)

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  23. Kiru TayeOctober 20, 2012 at 1:59 AM

    Gosh. This is scary. Well written.

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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:46 AM

      Dear Kiru,

      Welcome and happy Halloween. May we keep meeting in blog sphere :)

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  24. UnknownOctober 20, 2012 at 4:07 AM

    Dear Ghazala,
    What an excellently written, scary, creepy tale.
    You write with clarity and an economy of words.
    Well done.
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    RFW No. 46 - 'Jenny Holland's Robinson Crusoe Halloween'




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    1. UnknownOctober 21, 2012 at 11:48 AM

      Dear Anna,

      Thank you so much. I am glad you noticed the economy of words, almost made this into flash fiction :)

      This was one such piece, where i wrote and felt the scenes as well. Boo to you :)

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  25. ScarletOctober 20, 2012 at 5:35 AM

    That picture spooked me out ~ This is a scary plot, magnified by the thought that she is about to give birth to the baby ~

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    1. UnknownOctober 22, 2012 at 10:46 AM

      Dear Heaven,


      Thank you and happy Halloween to you, girl..!

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  26. HarikrishnaOctober 20, 2012 at 7:37 AM

    This one!!! From my childhood I'm afraid of darkness and this shadow concept and ghosts!!! Yet I love to read the horror stories rather than watching them on big screens.. A very good narration depicting the inner feelings of a person hearing creaky noises from a place near them where none lives.. Excellent!!!

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    1. UnknownOctober 22, 2012 at 11:03 AM

      Hari,

      Welcome to my space. Thank you for your detailed feedback. It made me feel good.
      I too like to read horror stories and it
      creeps me out more than horror movies :)

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  27. sathishOctober 20, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    No words. This is the best. I could not put it here the mixed emotions it created.

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  28. Charmaine ClancyOctober 20, 2012 at 11:53 AM

    Very creepy baby story! And the picture is very scary. Good work.

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  29. VinayOctober 20, 2012 at 12:28 PM

    Nice writings...

    May I suggest you a template for you blog? It's little distracted.... :(

    Tech Prévue · तकनीक दृष्टा

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  30. RenjuOctober 20, 2012 at 5:46 PM

    Thats really too scary and the very picture is not leaving my eyes!!

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:07 PM

      Hi Renju,

      LOL..! I am glad I could scare you :)

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  31. UnknownOctober 20, 2012 at 8:23 PM

    What a terrifying thing for a pregnant mother to endure. I recall having nightmares while I was pregnant. Your story was completely eerie and what a great entry.

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:08 PM

      Dear Candi,

      I too got nightmares while I was pregnant.
      Thanks and happy Halloween :)

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  32. N. R. WilliamsOctober 21, 2012 at 5:55 AM

    Hi Ghazala
    What a nightmare, and that picture made your story even creepier. I'm left with the impression that her baby is possessed from the ghost following her. That would be terrible. Loved it.
    Nancy

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:09 PM

      Dear NR,

      Yes, it is terrible and imagine it in real life..! LOL

      Thanks and happy Halloween :)

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  33. Denise Covey October 21, 2012 at 8:06 AM

    Ghazala, you weave a creepy tale. That image is PERFECT for your story. What an ending, so powerful. I was fully creeped out. Happy Halloween! :D

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:10 PM

      Dear Denise,

      Thank you, I am glad I could creep you out:p
      Happy Halloween :)

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  34. dolorahOctober 21, 2012 at 1:14 PM

    I'm thinking adoption is an option for this child, lol.

    wow, great imagery and vivid concept. And can you believe men; they do sleep through everything! Very sinister Ghazala.

    ......dhole

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:11 PM

      Donna,

      Yes, this baby would soon be up for adoption, anyone interested? LOL

      Thank you dear and happy Halloween :)

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  35. Sri ValliOctober 21, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    Felt the experience of seeing a horror movie in your words...Beautiful writing Ghazala!

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  36. ObsessivemomOctober 21, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    OMG I'm so glad I'm not pregnant. That was truly scary.

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:13 PM

      Hi,

      LOL, I am glad too, for you :p
      Thanks and happy halloween :)

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  37. eNOctober 21, 2012 at 10:56 PM

    Scaryy!! Good write-up

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  38. ArtiOctober 22, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    Oooohh! That was chilling! Great job, very well wriiten Ghazala! I was glued right throughout!

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:14 PM

      Dear Arti,

      Thank you for your words and Happy Halloween :)

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  39. Michael Di GesuOctober 23, 2012 at 5:58 AM

    Ghazala,

    Such a sinister tale. A evil ghost, terrorizing and imprinting on an unborn child. This is the scariest and most unnerving type of horror because it could happen. There are MANY angry spirits, sadly.

    Well done.

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    1. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:14 PM

      Michael,

      Was at your space and what a story you have weaved..! Bravo.
      Thanks for reading mine and Happy halloween :)

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  40. UnknownOctober 24, 2012 at 1:10 PM

    Yes, some great stories we have for this one :)

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  41. Erin Kane SpockOctober 26, 2012 at 10:47 PM

    That gave me chills. Add to her personal terror the fact that no one believed her, I was impressed with her concrete ego in that she believed herself.
    So far, this is the scariest of all the submissions I've read.

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    1. UnknownNovember 5, 2012 at 1:39 PM

      Thank you so much, Erin. I am thrilled with your feed back :)

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  42. Wendy LuOctober 28, 2012 at 7:33 AM

    Oh my goodness, how terrifying. Somehow this vaguely reminds me of Rosemary's Baby - have you seen that movie? Anyhow, awesome job getting in the spooky element here. And the visual you included made the whole story seem all the creepier.

    Apologies, I am just now getting through all of the House of Horrors excerpts. Hope you're having a good weekend!

    ~Wendy Lu

    The Red Angel Blog

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    1. UnknownNovember 5, 2012 at 1:45 PM

      Dear Wendy,

      I have not seen Rosemary's baby but now that you mentioned it, I want to see it.

      So good to meet you here, please visit again and please do not apologize. Thanks :)

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