Friday, January 18, 2013

Shameless


When I live my dreams
I fall in love with you
Like I have never been
Each emotion touch me
Roughly
Each feeling bleed
Sporadically











On a cold winter night
I am left warm
In a virtual gallery
Ruffled by memories
When, your shadow collide
In romantic delineate
With my “shameless” conscience~

Note: Personal picture~

36 comments:

  1. Hi Ghazala,

    Wow, lovely words in this poem. The image looks surreal as well.
    Why does the conscience have to be shameless?

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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    1. Thanks Jay, well conscience can be many things..LOL

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  2. Wow! Lovely!
    Sensuously, even sensually romantic!

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    1. Thank you Amit, I appreciate your words always :)

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  3. Shameless conscience there something more to it, otherwise beautifully worded.

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  4. Beautiful piece Ghazala! and lovely picture too! :)
    Yes, I agree, In dreams we need not be shameful. Dreams are the only places where impossible wishes can come true! beautifully penned!

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  5. Sparks of conscience, however tactfully phrased, are lacerations of the soul...ah, a passionate one!!
    Good to see you back :)

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  6. i guess i understood what does this poetry contemplate with anguish...

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  7. This is actually the third time I am reading it since morning and everytime I started typing something or other came up. Beautiful lines and that's your daughter, right? She acted as a perfect muse here :)

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    1. Dear Saru,

      Thanks, yes it is and she has no clue am using her picture :D

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    2. :) She will be more than pleased when she understand poetry. :)

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  8. shameless??? NAH!!! sensuous and passionate and beautiful

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  9. Shameless ??? Nah !!! sensuous and passionate and beautiful

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  10. Ghazala ma'am where's my comment? Kindly check your spam box...

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    1. Thank you Amit for informing, is was indeed hidden from my view
      :)

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  11. I love your thoughts interwoven with a beautiful picture as it makes a very delightful read, as always!!

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  12. Perfect pic with perfect words...seriously in love... :)

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  13. Nice Poem, If only I could understand properly. Image is just WOW...
    http://www.coralsandcrimsons.com

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  14. Very beautiful, Ghazala. The last two lines are my favorite. :)

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  15. I liked the pic also....and very romantic

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  16. romantic from beginning till end :) liked it!

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  17. Hey Ghazala....... Amazing poem. Beautifully written. Totally loved it and the image goes so well with the poem.

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