Sunday, June 3, 2012

ISLAND OF LOVE~


ISLAND OF LOVE~



You are an explosion
Breaking me into a thousand pieces
Each piece is cracked, chipped
Touched and retouched
Clobbered and kissed
Uneven rough edges
Cotton against skin
Rough to stroke
Passionate
Stutter around on tip toes
Broken ingredients
Dangling, chiming constantly
Like sounds of yore~
Weight-less memories
Raid on me
Melting inside
Jointly gel
Subsist as one
Tough to elucidate
Sneak in
Bit by bit letting in life
Drop by drop filling
Flooding crowding
Searching 
I extend for you~


Yes, I
Ravish a faceless, you
With unyielding eyes
Blinded
Soaked to core
Lost to conclusions
Of every breed
By a steady drizzle
Tapping nonentity
I caress amber to blue..!
Drenched, diluted and submerged
Is my island of love~
Disclaimer: Pictures from google.

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    1. Thank you for your first comment <3

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  3. Touching perception and vibrant emotions...lovely for sure :)

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    1. Thank you Di, you are the best :)

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  5. beautifully sensuous writing

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    1. Thank you, you do have a magic eye :)

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  6. ...absolutely wonderful...wow!

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    1. Hi Amit,

      Great to see you here, happy to receive your feedback:)

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    1. Hey, that is so sweet of you, thanks :)

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  9. I apologize for the typo:
    Amazingly, viciously, maddeningly expressive!

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    1. Typo happens and at odd times, so do not worry when I am happy for such an expressive comment :)

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  10. The sensuous one searches the core
    for that love still untold.
    Search she does underneath bridges
    and between the ridges.
    Overflowing, melting, sans holds
    steps she takes quite bold.
    Exploring within, stretching beyond pleasure and pain
    heart drenched in tear and rain.
    Drop by drop as the drops melt
    warmth from her sure is felt.
    Rising above all with hope and despair
    the search for remorseless love seems fair.

    (thanks for inspiring the lines above)
    May read also: http://thandavum.blogspot.in/2012/01/lovers-temptation.html

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