I stand beside you
not with you
You are so far away
I have lost my way
to you~
All I can do is wait, here
and endure
There is no future (for me)
until you return
even then I am not sure
life will be the similar
like before
when you were all mine
all the while~
Love has left your heart
It is not easy to bring it,
home, again
Yet I keep the faith…
In the silent vow that we took
With a touch, a feel, a look
When we fell in love
Were we too young to know?
Love is tough to come
Easy to go,
When you declared your love
Without a plan
I loved you then
Like love was meant to be~
Love can mean so many different things
To different people
I want to let you go
Do you know
Deep down somewhere
I am struggling to slaughter
my love for you, hour by hour
Until then, I will love you a little more
With you, for you, without a care~
***
Lovely lines...
ReplyDeleteSanta, *wondering if that is your real name*
DeleteThanks a bunch for reading and leaving me a feedback.
It helps :)
Beautiful! How else can anyone put it? you have touched all the
ReplyDeleteangles.. //Deep down somewhere
I am struggling to slaughter
my love for you, hour by hour//
Hi Vetri,
DeleteThank you, I am so touched. Keep coming and lets stay in touch:)
Will hop over to your space in a min~
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ReplyDeletethis is brilliant!! absolutely loved it.
ReplyDeleteThis made my day, today..! *giggles*
DeleteThanks~
Beautiful lines..:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you sweety, always nice to see you here :)
Deleteaah...lovely lines but, dare not 'slaughter' love..!!Love is peace...awesome :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Di, sometimes love kills :))
Deletekilling you softly.....
ReplyDeleteThank you <3
Deletebrilliant !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks gurl..! I am jumping on my seat :)
Deletebeautiful lines, ghazala -- depth of emotion and thought went into it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, feelings pour sometimes :)
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the support :)
Delete'I'm struggling to slaughter my love' seems to have moved us all. Good one, Ghazala.
ReplyDeleteIt is difficult to kill your love on your own :)
DeleteThanks for such sweet words~
I read, paused, then read, paused, then read, replayed,
ReplyDeleteeach time my dream theater plays a different images and visions... not sure whether I am reading between lines...
Kudos.
Satish,
DeleteMan, this is he best comment. I have loads of poems scribbled, I would be lucky to get a reader like you, always Thanks for sure :)
Hey Thanks, it feels good to know about your research and that you wish me to participate in it.
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such a beautiful poem..!!
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Thanks Sj, words can do magic and here are some simple words 'keep smiling' :)
Deletethis is lovely.... wish i could write poetry too!
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Ash,
DeleteIt is easy, when you are feeling strongly about something just sit down and pour. Thanks for making me feel good :)
Thanks Ranjana, good to meet you here :)
ReplyDeleteLoved every word of yours. "Were we too young to know? Love is tough to come Easy to go" these touched very deep.
ReplyDeleteAmazing lines Ghazala ji
Thank you Mak,
ReplyDeletea co-blogger and a reader like you is all we need :))
wonderfully crafted words...nice lines!
ReplyDeleteHey Kalyan,
DeleteThanks man, do keep coming back with such nice words :)
beautiful poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepz,
DeleteYour appreciation matters :)
Woooh soaked in love I guess :) Nice one and very touching however I also feel some pain? All ok at your end? Take care
ReplyDeleteHey Hari,
DeleteThis is just poetry, a little sadness is allowed.
Everything is fine, this was inspired by the above picture.
Thank you for your concern, I remain delighted :)
hello Sriram,
ReplyDeleteIt feels nice to find a reader like you.
You got the feel of the post, thanks :)
Love, like fine sand, can slip away if one is careless; but like you said in the end, surrender is better than trying to hold on.
ReplyDeletePoetry to me,unlike prose, is forever a mystery. But being associated with so many bloggers I encounter poets so often .. maybe by & by I will unravel the mystery.
Hello Jayadevm,
DeleteThanks, love is love, so difficult to define :)
And yes, you will soon unravel the mysteries of
poetry and when you do, do tag me. ~
Beautiful, the pain of being in love has been described so well... It was my first time on your blog, and your poems really made me want to read more!
ReplyDeleteDear Amruta,
DeleteIt is so nice to know, you loved reading my poems.
I feel recharged. Will post some more. Thanks :))