Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Without a care~


I stand beside you
not with you
You are so far away
I have lost my way
to you~
All I can do is wait, here
and endure
There is no future (for me)
until you return
even then I am not sure
life will be the similar
like before
when you were all mine
all the while~
Love has left your heart
It is not easy to bring it,
home, again
Yet I keep the faith…
In the silent vow that we took
With a touch, a feel, a look
When we fell in love
Were we too young to know?
Love is tough to come
Easy to go,
When you declared your love
Without a plan
I loved you then
Like love was meant to be~
Love can mean so many different things
To different people
I want to let you go
Do you know
Deep down somewhere
I am struggling to slaughter
my love for you, hour by hour
Until then, I will love you a little more
With you, for you, without a care~
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    1. Santa, *wondering if that is your real name*

      Thanks a bunch for reading and leaving me a feedback.
      It helps :)

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  2. Beautiful! How else can anyone put it? you have touched all the
    angles.. //Deep down somewhere
    I am struggling to slaughter
    my love for you, hour by hour//

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    1. Hi Vetri,

      Thank you, I am so touched. Keep coming and lets stay in touch:)
      Will hop over to your space in a min~

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  4. this is brilliant!! absolutely loved it.

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    1. This made my day, today..! *giggles*
      Thanks~

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    1. Thank you sweety, always nice to see you here :)

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  6. aah...lovely lines but, dare not 'slaughter' love..!!Love is peace...awesome :)

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    1. Thank you Di, sometimes love kills :))

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    1. Thanks gurl..! I am jumping on my seat :)

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  8. beautiful lines, ghazala -- depth of emotion and thought went into it.

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    1. Thanks, feelings pour sometimes :)

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  9. 'I'm struggling to slaughter my love' seems to have moved us all. Good one, Ghazala.

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    1. It is difficult to kill your love on your own :)
      Thanks for such sweet words~

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    1. Hey Thanks, it feels good to know about your research and that you wish me to participate in it.
      How do i do that? I do not have your email suggested by you :)

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  11. I read, paused, then read, paused, then read, replayed,
    each time my dream theater plays a different images and visions... not sure whether I am reading between lines...
    Kudos.

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    1. Satish,

      Man, this is he best comment. I have loads of poems scribbled, I would be lucky to get a reader like you, always Thanks for sure :)

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    1. Thanks Ranjana, good to meet you here :)

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  13. such a beautiful poem..!!

    http://styledestino.blogspot.com/

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    1. Thanks Sj, words can do magic and here are some simple words 'keep smiling' :)

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  14. this is lovely.... wish i could write poetry too!

    http://e-pinion.blogspot.in

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    1. Ash,
      It is easy, when you are feeling strongly about something just sit down and pour. Thanks for making me feel good :)

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  15. Loved every word of yours. "Were we too young to know? Love is tough to come Easy to go" these touched very deep.
    Amazing lines Ghazala ji

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  16. Thank you Mak,

    a co-blogger and a reader like you is all we need :))

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  17. wonderfully crafted words...nice lines!

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    1. Hey Kalyan,

      Thanks man, do keep coming back with such nice words :)

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    1. Thank you Deepz,


      Your appreciation matters :)

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  19. Woooh soaked in love I guess :) Nice one and very touching however I also feel some pain? All ok at your end? Take care

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    1. Hey Hari,

      This is just poetry, a little sadness is allowed.
      Everything is fine, this was inspired by the above picture.
      Thank you for your concern, I remain delighted :)

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  20. If only the man realized the love of someone that waits.

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    1. hello Sriram,

      It feels nice to find a reader like you.
      You got the feel of the post, thanks :)

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  21. Love, like fine sand, can slip away if one is careless; but like you said in the end, surrender is better than trying to hold on.

    Poetry to me,unlike prose, is forever a mystery. But being associated with so many bloggers I encounter poets so often .. maybe by & by I will unravel the mystery.

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    1. Hello Jayadevm,

      Thanks, love is love, so difficult to define :)
      And yes, you will soon unravel the mysteries of
      poetry and when you do, do tag me. ~

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  22. Beautiful, the pain of being in love has been described so well... It was my first time on your blog, and your poems really made me want to read more!

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    1. Dear Amruta,

      It is so nice to know, you loved reading my poems.
      I feel recharged. Will post some more. Thanks :))

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