My Daughter: Anam Hossain
She was standing before me,
in a short green jumpsuit, impishly grinning: happy as always. Her beautiful
brown hair tied neatly to a side. A touch of eye liner along her eyelashes made
me gasp my breath. Ah..! She not only looked grown up and she also looked gorgeous.
Every June, she celebrates her birthday and this June she turned thirteen
making it a very special month for her.
My daughter is a very today-ish
girl, a girl of action, always on the run, sweating it out never worries how
she looks. Basketball, football, dancing and ‘Help age India’ took most of her
free time. However, her naturally brown hair always moves around her in full
participation of all her activities.
As a mother, I have always
insisted that she shampoos her hair every other day. Her hair is her best
feature and so far she had been careless about it. So far…
And now she was before me all
fresh from a shampoo, speaking these magical words, ‘…and that was the end of m
hair problems!’ I was not sure, I heard her right. I could not be sure. I heard
her alright and noticed how fresh she looked, especially her hair. She seemed
excited like she does after a Basket ball match, only now she was not sweaty. In
fact, she looked beautiful and neat with her hair tied to a side.
Before she went to take her
bath, she had insisted, ‘Mom, I am thirteen now, can I please use your shampoo?
Please, please pretty please’.
‘My shampoo is not for you ‘bachche’.
It is for oldies like me. Why do not you use your baby shampoo?’
‘No, Mom, Dove shampoo is
perfect for everyone with hair problems. Even Grandma uses it. A good stuff is
good for all, right’?
Who could argue with that
kind of logic, straight forward and simple, just like her. By the way, she was
not over convincing me. ‘And Mom, you are not old. Look at you, all my friends’
call you hat and your hair is a dream, all because of Dove damage therapy’.
When you daughter appreciates
you, it is the best feeling in the world. I smile at her and that encouraged
her to speak her mind more.
‘Mom, I have always eyed your
Dove shampoo bottle. I have used it behind your back. And every time, it has
left my hair nourished. I love the color and smell. Each drop is like this snow
white that gets lost in the Jungle of my tangled hair and my fingers are seven
dwarfs helping her, except that there are ten dwarfs, I mean fingers’.
She looked straight from one
of those advertisements on television, when she said, ‘I can now safely
recommend Dove Damage therapy shampoo and conditioner to all my friends and
yours too. Dove shampoo is ‘on the run’ solution to all kinds of hair problem
for all age’.
We both ended up hugging and
laughing together.
This contest is sponsored by: Dove hair-aware app
Find the details on Indieblogger: "... and that was the end of my hair problems! ".
Vote for my entry here.
Vote for my entry here.
What a Surprise, Sridhar..! So happy to see you as my first comment. I feel all positive now :)
ReplyDeleteLovely! I do agree with this cutie daughter of yours.. you do look hot:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Chitu, so happy to see you here. OMG..! Let me feel this moment:)
DeleteThe punch line was beautifully woven into the tale!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes!!
Thanks magiceye,
DeleteYou are always welcome here :)
this is a lovely post!! all the best for the contest!!
ReplyDeletejust wondering how this post popped up on indi after 3 days. it was not there when i checked in the morning.
Thanks, Debajyoti for your wishes :)
DeleteI had posted it a couple of days before for Dove contest
and it was hidden along with other posts.
They displayed all the posts under the contest sometime today.
Nice! Daughters are good criticizer for a Mom and they always tend to appreciate their Mom at every age :)
ReplyDeleteYou are so right, daughters
Deleteare first to point out your
blunders, thanks for being
here.
Will look forward to your feedback :)
Your daughter looks so pretty. Lovely conversation between mom and daughter. Loved it
ReplyDeleteThank you Kanmani, my dotty will be so pleased with you :))
DeleteA nice post with a sweet dialogue with your cute daughter:) Best wishes for the contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rahul, this feels good :)
DeleteLoved ur article..A sure shot winner.read my entry too..thanks
ReplyDeletehttp://www.ankionthemove.com/2012/06/goodbye-to-tangled-tresses.html
Ankita sweet,
DeleteWill check your post asap. Thanks for your wishes.
Winning is not in our hand, participation is :))
your daughter is very pretty ...my 3 yr old has already started insisting on using my shampoo :) Lovely post ...All the best for the contest !
ReplyDeleteThanks Gurl:) Girls are the best and when they are three years old they are the cutest :))
Deletegreat read as always Ghazala--a sweet blog and your daughter is soo sweet give her a hug from me God Bless her
ReplyDeletelove
rajni
Rajs,
DeleteYou have no idea, how I feel to see you here, warm and all happy XOXO
thank you, will pass on your hug to my dotty :)
:) You're both pretty girls. And now thanks to Dove, you'll continue to have good hair ;).
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the contest and good luck with the teenager. :D
D dear,
DeleteSo sweet of you to call me a girl..! You made my day..!LOL
I do need luck as I have two teenagers now, the other being my son.
Thanks and keep in touch :)
So yours is a family of Dove lovers! :-) All the best for the contest...
ReplyDeleteThanks and likewise :)
DeleteDang girl-that was like a great ad for Dove! The folks there would be loving you:):)
ReplyDeleteBhavna sweet,
DeleteThat is the idea..LOL
Thanks and Amen to that:)
A very happy birthday to Anam :-) she is indeed very pretty.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing entry for the contest. I hope you win Ghazala ji.
Anam is true when she describes her mom's beauty :-)
A double thanks Mak, form my dotty and me :)
DeleteAnd Amen, it would be great to win *elated*
nice
ReplyDeleteSuman,
DeleteThank you for your comment, means a lot :)
That was short and sweet :)
ReplyDeleteYou can experiment this to our monkey friend ??:)
good luck ji
Deepak,
DeleteWhat is this 420 for? Okay there is a * which means conditions apply...LOL
Thanks, if only you had given this free suggestion while I was in Koh samui..!! *giggles*
A beautiful portrayal of a mothers concern on her daughters hair..all the best with the contest
ReplyDeleteThanks Tomz for reading this and for your best wishes. See you around :)
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DeleteThat was a wonderful blog, ghazala.... Aman is as stylish as her Mom...:))You weaved that punch line gracefully :) Nice...all the best!!
ReplyDeleteDear Di,
DeleteThank you, your blessing is all I need :)
Nice one.
ReplyDeleteHi Fool,
DeleteYou are cool, thanks~
A nice write up with the photo of your cute daughter.
ReplyDeleteWish you all the best for the contest
S.V.
DeleteThank you for your generous feedback, meant a lot :)
Indeed... Your daughter should love Dove shampoo for taking care of her hair, and should love her mom for taking care of her :)
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DeleteHello captain,
DeleteWelcome to my space *I am grinning to have on here* Thanks a ton and always welcome. My daughter is a Dove addict and so am I :)
ps: Let me settle down a bit, will visit every one's page :)
It's not a compulsion to visit everyone's page, Ghazala :)
DeleteYou have a nice style of writing; you make the reader feel like she/he is there.
P.S. Please call me Vishal. I'm just another amateur blogger :)
Hey Vishal,
DeleteI was just trying to be 'cute'...!lol We mature ladies do that to pull legs in good fun :)
No compulsion, but I would like to know everyone and have 100% blast this IBL, thanks for coming back:)
Wonderfully sweet, Ghazala! Your daughter is very beautiful and so is her hair :) All the best! :)
ReplyDeleteDear Arti,
DeleteAlways happy to see you here, was missing you <3
I have to agree, my dotty has beautiful hair,
Thanks for noticing :))
wonderful post, ur daughter is as sweet as you :)
ReplyDeleteDear Jas,
DeleteThanks, yes daughters are wonderful gift :)
Lovely hair tale :) best wishes for the contest Ghazala :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Neha,
DeleteComing from a recent winner, this meant a lot :)
Awww such a lovely post. Could be a nice scene in a Bollywood film :) So did you win this contest? Are the results out? All the very best and continue ur gud work
ReplyDeleteThanks Hari,
DeleteOnly this is real life :))
Not yet, thanks for your wishes,
Gonna need them~
nice
ReplyDeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteThank you and Be positive :)
Love your daughter,in fact i love ALL daughters.
ReplyDeleteHope you win.
Thank you Indu,
ReplyDeleteYou are right, all daughters are lovable :)
Such a beautiful post!
ReplyDeleteAnd I love your name soooo much!
:)
My name is way too common!
All the very best for the contest! I tried penning down an entry too!Do have a look!
http://priyankazneverland.blogspot.in/2012/07/hair-we-go-again.html
Dear Priyanka,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words. You do have a beautiful name as well:))
Will check your post right away ~
Your daughter is so much like you .. so pretty. Enjoyed reading a mom's story for the contest.
ReplyDeleteDear Farila,
DeleteThank you so much. You are right, my daughter is so much like me :)