He hugged
She ducked
He leered
She jeered
He copied
She worried
He lashed
She whipped
He launched
She punched
He grabbed
She stabbed
He kicked
She Jumped
He resolved
She evolved
He fire balled
She made water fall
He drowned
She was crowned
He looked
She laughed
PS: Arham is my son's name. Note: 55 words Micro fiction. Written on 2 June 2010.
Disclaimer: Picture is from google.
Ha ha ha:) Great Ghazala!
ReplyDeleteAmit,
DeleteThis was written in good fun..! Glad you enjoyed :)
lovely :)
ReplyDeleteSaikat,
DeleteSo much can happen in 55 words and in a video game. thanks :)
nice to read about your son. well written Ghazala.
ReplyDeleteHere's something I tried. Watch it here http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/07/a-requiem.html
Oh yes, I son is the inspiration behind this one.
DeleteHe loved these games :)
Thanks,
Good to see you here~
:) good racy pacy one!
ReplyDeleteMagic,
Deleteyes, kids these days can not slow down. Thanks :)
Nice thought!...'Arham' nice name :)
ReplyDeleteDear Valli,
DeleteThanks and glad you liked my son's name.
Too Good!
ReplyDeleteDear Jaish,
DeleteThanks and my pleasure :)
Good one, though the pic ruined it for me. I saw it before only as and..!
ReplyDeletenice one thought! :)
Vineet,
DeleteI did think over the picture bu then thought the title is a give away as well.
Thanks for an honest feedback :)
I laughed. :D
ReplyDeleteAkshay,
DeleteThis was written in fun, glad you enjoyed.
Thanks~
hahaha ghazala ----phew I read
ReplyDeletewith dread
what would be ahead-----loved it am still laughing.
Dear Rajs,
DeleteThat is how I meant it to be :)
Thanks~
Nice one.
ReplyDeleteGod Morning Rajesh,
DeleteThanks for reading me :)
I had a real laugh. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteSabyasachi
Hello Sabyasachi,
DeleteThanks and hope to see you more on these pages :)
Hey good one, Ghazala. This was a refreshing f55.
ReplyDeleteDear DN,
Delete55 micro can be a real versatile form.
Have played around with it, plenty.
Thanks and keep in touch:)
nice one...gave a hilarious reading to it. :)
ReplyDeleteGunjan,
DeleteThanks for letting me know :)
I wish I hadn't read the title...wouldve been even more fun to figure it out only in the end!!! :)
ReplyDeleteDear Shreya,
DeleteI know what you mean. The title is a dead give away.
Thanks :)
Well played, Arham! Smashing 55, Ghaz...!
ReplyDeleteDear Panchalidi,
DeleteThanks and delighted as always to see you here:)
As fast paced as that game!
ReplyDeleteDear Purba,
DeleteThanks plenty :)
BOUNCER!
ReplyDeleteIndu dear,
DeleteYesss..! Thanks :)
fab!!!! enjoyed :)
ReplyDeleteDear TTT,
DeleteThanks and shoot..! lol
:-)
ReplyDeletesuperb!!!!
i love surprises..and shocks...
:-)
god bless u and ur son.
anu
Dear Anu,
DeleteThanks and hugs :)
LOL.. I thoroughly enjoyed that one.
ReplyDeleteDear Fari,
DeleteSo happy to see you on my space..! v_V
Keep visiting dear. Thanks and hugs
Good to see you here Ghazala! hope to be always connected for our common love! :) Akila....
ReplyDeleteDear Novel,
DeleteThanks for finding me. Such a pleasure to see an old friend :)
Wow nice once. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteSandeep,
DeleteThanks for the pat :)
Maybe you should end with 'Game over.' But it's all a matter of personal taste.
ReplyDeleteHi Shovonc,
DeleteWell, good suggestion. But now it is done.
Thanks and keep reading :)
Very intelligently written :) You should let the readers to choose a title of the post. I think that would've been fun
ReplyDeleteHi Hari,
DeleteInteresting idea...! Thanks, will try to
use it sometime :)
It was a fun read. What was your son's reaction on it, if he is old enough to understand?
ReplyDeleteDear Saru,
DeleteMy son is 14 years of age, where he find all this embarrassing:))
Thanks girl..!
Ghazala, this was a lovely read! Truly innovative:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rahul B,
DeleteI appreciate this :)
Arham experienced and you expressed it. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteHello PN,
DeleteMy son is a game addict..!
Thanks, good to see you here :)
super cool
ReplyDeleteReflections | Tumblr | Snapshot
Hello Jidhu,
DeleteThanks man :)
Enjoyed It...i had a little laugh :-)..Very Nice...
ReplyDeleteThanks Mahi,
DeleteYou have such a nice name :)
Ur son's name is so nice..liked the post vey much..such a wonderful imagination..u rock Ghazala!!
ReplyDeleteDear Ranita,
DeleteThis one is an old write,
Glad you liked it. 55 words micro fiction
always fascinated me. Thanks lady :)
Arham plays agsinst females usually..? ;)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it
Mak,
DeleteYou got me...! More than Arham it is his Mom who
imagines that he plays against females :p
Thanks for being here :)
He cheered... the awesome 55 fiction written by his mom :)
ReplyDeleteGreat thinking, Ghazala :)
Dear Vishal,
DeleteBetter late than never. Happy to have you here :)
Thanks bachche :p
Brilliant ... beautifully written Ghazala
ReplyDeleteThank you Amit,
DeleteI am so happy..!
Brilliantly written!!
ReplyDeleteI also love 55 fiction purely for the crispness it has!!
hi Me,
ReplyDeleteI love 55 micro fic too. It is exciting and like you said crisp.
Thank you for your feed back :D