Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Game Boy~


He hugged
She ducked
He leered
She jeered
He copied
She worried
He lashed
She whipped
He launched 
She punched
He grabbed
She stabbed
He kicked
She Jumped
He resolved
She evolved
He fire balled
She made water fall
He drowned
She was crowned
He looked
She laughed
Game over, Arham saved and logged out.



PS: Arham is my son's name. Note: 55 words Micro fiction. Written on 2 June 2010.
Disclaimer: Picture is from google.       

68 comments:

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    1. Amit,

      This was written in good fun..! Glad you enjoyed :)

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    1. Saikat,

      So much can happen in 55 words and in a video game. thanks :)

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  3. nice to read about your son. well written Ghazala.

    Here's something I tried. Watch it here http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/07/a-requiem.html

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    1. Oh yes, I son is the inspiration behind this one.
      He loved these games :)
      Thanks,
      Good to see you here~

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    1. Magic,

      yes, kids these days can not slow down. Thanks :)

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  5. Nice thought!...'Arham' nice name :)

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    1. Dear Valli,

      Thanks and glad you liked my son's name.

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  6. Good one, though the pic ruined it for me. I saw it before only as and..!
    nice one thought! :)

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    1. Vineet,

      I did think over the picture bu then thought the title is a give away as well.
      Thanks for an honest feedback :)

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    1. Akshay,

      This was written in fun, glad you enjoyed.
      Thanks~

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  8. hahaha ghazala ----phew I read
    with dread
    what would be ahead-----loved it am still laughing.

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    1. Dear Rajs,

      That is how I meant it to be :)
      Thanks~

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    1. God Morning Rajesh,


      Thanks for reading me :)

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  10. I had a real laugh. Enjoyed it.
    Sabyasachi

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    1. Hello Sabyasachi,

      Thanks and hope to see you more on these pages :)

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  11. Hey good one, Ghazala. This was a refreshing f55.

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    1. Dear DN,

      55 micro can be a real versatile form.
      Have played around with it, plenty.
      Thanks and keep in touch:)

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  12. nice one...gave a hilarious reading to it. :)

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  13. I wish I hadn't read the title...wouldve been even more fun to figure it out only in the end!!! :)

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    1. Dear Shreya,

      I know what you mean. The title is a dead give away.
      Thanks :)

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  14. Well played, Arham! Smashing 55, Ghaz...!

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    1. Dear Panchalidi,

      Thanks and delighted as always to see you here:)

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  15. :-)
    superb!!!!
    i love surprises..and shocks...
    :-)
    god bless u and ur son.

    anu

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  16. LOL.. I thoroughly enjoyed that one.

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    1. Dear Fari,

      So happy to see you on my space..! v_V
      Keep visiting dear. Thanks and hugs

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  17. Good to see you here Ghazala! hope to be always connected for our common love! :) Akila....

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    1. Dear Novel,

      Thanks for finding me. Such a pleasure to see an old friend :)

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  18. Maybe you should end with 'Game over.' But it's all a matter of personal taste.

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    1. Hi Shovonc,

      Well, good suggestion. But now it is done.
      Thanks and keep reading :)

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  19. Very intelligently written :) You should let the readers to choose a title of the post. I think that would've been fun

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    1. Hi Hari,

      Interesting idea...! Thanks, will try to
      use it sometime :)

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  20. It was a fun read. What was your son's reaction on it, if he is old enough to understand?

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    1. Dear Saru,

      My son is 14 years of age, where he find all this embarrassing:))
      Thanks girl..!

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  21. Ghazala, this was a lovely read! Truly innovative:)

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  22. Arham experienced and you expressed it. Wonderful.

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    1. Hello PN,

      My son is a game addict..!
      Thanks, good to see you here :)

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  23. Enjoyed It...i had a little laugh :-)..Very Nice...

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    1. Thanks Mahi,

      You have such a nice name :)

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  24. Ur son's name is so nice..liked the post vey much..such a wonderful imagination..u rock Ghazala!!

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    1. Dear Ranita,

      This one is an old write,
      Glad you liked it. 55 words micro fiction
      always fascinated me. Thanks lady :)

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  25. Arham plays agsinst females usually..? ;)
    Enjoyed reading it

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    1. Mak,


      You got me...! More than Arham it is his Mom who
      imagines that he plays against females :p
      Thanks for being here :)

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  26. He cheered... the awesome 55 fiction written by his mom :)

    Great thinking, Ghazala :)

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    1. Dear Vishal,

      Better late than never. Happy to have you here :)
      Thanks bachche :p

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  27. Brilliantly written!!

    I also love 55 fiction purely for the crispness it has!!

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  28. hi Me,


    I love 55 micro fic too. It is exciting and like you said crisp.
    Thank you for your feed back :D

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