Friday, January 18, 2013

Shameless


When I live my dreams
I fall in love with you
Like I have never been
Each emotion touch me
Roughly
Each feeling bleed
Sporadically











On a cold winter night
I am left warm
In a virtual gallery
Ruffled by memories
When, your shadow collide
In romantic delineate
With my “shameless” conscience~

Note: Personal picture~

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36 comments:

  1. provoqdJanuary 18, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    Hi Ghazala,

    Wow, lovely words in this poem. The image looks surreal as well.
    Why does the conscience have to be shameless?

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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    1. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:10 AM

      Thanks Jay, well conscience can be many things..LOL

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  2. AmitAagJanuary 18, 2013 at 1:07 PM

    Wow! Lovely!
    Sensuously, even sensually romantic!

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    1. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:11 AM

      Thank you Amit, I appreciate your words always :)

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  3. magiceyeJanuary 18, 2013 at 1:31 PM

    Freed from societal shackles!

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  4. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2013 at 3:32 PM

    Nice words, Ghazala!

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  5. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 18, 2013 at 4:30 PM

    Shameless conscience there something more to it, otherwise beautifully worded.

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    1. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:12 AM

      Thanks, well there is always more to a poem :D

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  6. M S MahawarJanuary 18, 2013 at 5:36 PM

    Beautiful Poem !

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  7. Sri ValliJanuary 18, 2013 at 5:56 PM

    Beautiful piece Ghazala! and lovely picture too! :)
    Yes, I agree, In dreams we need not be shameful. Dreams are the only places where impossible wishes can come true! beautifully penned!

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  8. PanchaliJanuary 18, 2013 at 8:05 PM

    Sparks of conscience, however tactfully phrased, are lacerations of the soul...ah, a passionate one!!
    Good to see you back :)

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  9. sathishJanuary 18, 2013 at 10:41 PM

    i guess i understood what does this poetry contemplate with anguish...

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  10. VinayJanuary 18, 2013 at 11:37 PM

    Firework!

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  11. Saru SinghalJanuary 18, 2013 at 11:47 PM

    This is actually the third time I am reading it since morning and everytime I started typing something or other came up. Beautiful lines and that's your daughter, right? She acted as a perfect muse here :)

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    1. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:14 AM

      Dear Saru,

      Thanks, yes it is and she has no clue am using her picture :D

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    2. Saru SinghalJanuary 19, 2013 at 8:30 PM

      :) She will be more than pleased when she understand poetry. :)

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  12. Rajni SinhaJanuary 19, 2013 at 12:52 AM

    shameless??? NAH!!! sensuous and passionate and beautiful

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  13. Rajni SinhaJanuary 19, 2013 at 12:53 AM

    Shameless ??? Nah !!! sensuous and passionate and beautiful

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    1. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:15 AM

      Dear Rajs,

      How i enjoy seeing you here? Thanks :D

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  14. AmitAagJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:07 AM

    Ghazala ma'am where's my comment? Kindly check your spam box...

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    1. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 11:09 AM

      Thank you Amit for informing, is was indeed hidden from my view
      :)

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  15. Privy TriflesJanuary 19, 2013 at 12:25 PM

    I love your thoughts interwoven with a beautiful picture as it makes a very delightful read, as always!!

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  16. MakJanuary 19, 2013 at 4:21 PM

    ahhh romantic Ghazala ji..

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  17. UnknownJanuary 19, 2013 at 10:51 PM

    Perfect pic with perfect words...seriously in love... :)

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  18. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    Nice Poem, If only I could understand properly. Image is just WOW...
    http://www.coralsandcrimsons.com

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  19. Akshay Kumar GJanuary 21, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    Very beautiful, Ghazala. The last two lines are my favorite. :)

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  20. Ranjana's craft blogJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:38 AM

    I liked the pic also....and very romantic

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  21. Saurabh ChawlaJanuary 27, 2013 at 9:49 AM

    romantic from beginning till end :) liked it!

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  22. Samar KhanApril 2, 2013 at 4:10 PM

    Hey Ghazala....... Amazing poem. Beautifully written. Totally loved it and the image goes so well with the poem.

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