She woke up with tired yet curious eyes. Her mind was like a
blank blanket, ready soak in memories. A throb was hammering on the
left side of her left eye. She was not sure how long she was awake or how many
times she woke up before this. She wanted to lift her hand and press her head.
A woman with a face full of emotions was sitting by her bed. She had a black robe hanging around her: a Burkha just like her
friend Zora wore. It was a sign of a Muslim religious woman. And since her return from Haj, Zora made it a
point to wear it. But that was so long back.
Nanda closed her eyes and wished Zora was here. Maybe she
was. She called out her friend’s name, which made the woman in the
room get up and come forward. The strange woman smelled of jasmine as she hugged
her. Her hands were gentle, comforting. Nanda tried to
ask questions, unsuccessfully.
A nurse entered the room urgently and injected
some medicines into the saline tube attached to her hand. She left the room with instructions to let the patient rest.
The woman with the black robe on her part talked animatedly and looked positively excited. Soon, drowse took over Nanda, and she fell asleep.
The woman with the black robe on her part talked animatedly and looked positively excited. Soon, drowse took over Nanda, and she fell asleep.
She woke up again in the middle of the night. The room was
filtered with blue light and looked kind of eerie. Where was she? She had no
recollection of her whereabouts. She felt warm and comfortable under the
blanket. The place had the smell of a hospital. Nanda
saw a woman was sleeping on a sofa beside her bed..
Nanda wanted to sit up but found herself drained of
strength. Her head felt like a ton of brick. When she turned her head, her left
eye hurt like it had been stabbed a couple of times.
She wondered about the woman on the sofa. Who was this
woman? What was she doing there? Was it her friend Zora, for she had the same
body proportions and was wearing a Burkha? Nanda could not help but think of Samir, Zora’s
brother and the love of her life. Where was he? Was he aware that she was in a
hospital? Would he care enough to come visit her?
They had been in love for a long time but he had married a Muslim girl to
please his family. On days like this she wished, she had him by her side. But
there was no way that was possible. Their respective families had made it clear;
they would never accept the difference in their religion.
Nanda found herself crying. Tears spilled out of her eyes
and her left eye burnt like someone had poured acid in it. She tried to sleep
and found it the easiest thing to do.
Nanda heard the noises first and opened her eyes next, to
find five people surrounding her. Her first impression was of shock. Where was she?
Who were these people? There were two girls, who wore
white uniform and looked like nurses.
There was a woman wearing a Burkha, who had the kindest of faces. She was the first one to take
notice of her and came forward. A clear affectionate face, which had
multiple concerned lines. However, she was most definitely not Zora, her
childhood friend, who too wore a similar black robe.
‘Noor, how are you, beta?’ She ruffled her hair and kissed
her cheek. She did not wait for her to reply instead turned around to hug the
other two in the room. She was chanting a prayer in Urdu and went to a corner
of the Spartan room to roll out a mat to do her Namaz.
The two men she hugged were obviously her relatives. The older
one smiled through his tears. He came forward and took her hand in his.
‘Noor, you had us worried. Thank Almighty God for keeping you safe. Your mother
almost died with shock’.
Nanda immediately liked the man even though she was not sure
what he was saying and why he was addressing her as Noor.
‘Noor Apa, so happy to see you doing fine. You have been
sleeping like for two days, now. I almost asked Sanjay bhaiya to come and kiss his
sleeping beauty, good morning. He is on his way’.
Nanda realized, she was perhaps in some kind of an accident. That did not worry her, what bothered her was, who
was this Noor? Why everyone thought she was her.
‘What happened to me’?
She asked uncertainly. The woman, who acted like she was her Mom, was done with her
prayers. She came forward to bless her.
‘Oh, you don’t remember your
accident, do you? You crashed your car’.
‘Oh…’ Nanda had no recollection of ever driving a car. She did not know anyone who owned a car.
‘You wanted to surprise Sanjay Bhaiya. He was out on a tour for a week’. The young boy had
settle on the sofa next to his Dad.
‘You hit your head hard on the steering wheel and fainted.
We were so worried for last two days’. The man was supposedly her father, the woman her mother and the young boy was
her brother. But she could not believe she was married to some Sanjay. There
was no way she could love anyone except Samir. And then a tall man
in his late twenties, who had the most adorable eyes walked in. It was her Samir.
‘Sanjay bhaiya, your sleeping princess of a wife woke up
before the kiss’. The teenager joked.
‘Noor is no sleeping princess. Ours is a modern love story,
where a Hindu boy married
‘How are you, my patient’? He held her hand and put his lips
to it.
‘I am good, Samir’. Nanda said. She was surprised that she was
a Muslim girl and Samir was a Hindu boy. However, they seem to be happily
married. At times, dreams take multiple births to come true.
‘You called me, Samir?’ He asked with quizzical eyes beaming
with love.
‘What’s in a name?’ Noor replied with a wide smile.
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A passionate love story, Ghaz. Your extraordinary skill in portraying Nanda's mind builds a tale of beautiful love. A fine write up...its going to mesmerize everyone--and I'm so sure!!!! A winning piece! xoxo
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ReplyDeleteYour appreciation always encourages me. Thank you so much. I am glad you liked this one. Wrote it in a hurry :D
That's a sweet love story, Gazala. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Diptee :D
DeleteWow! Nicely woven there Ghazala!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sweetheart :D
Deletethis reminds me the 'spirit brides' of Gibran...
ReplyDeleteloved this plot very much...
Very sweet.
ReplyDeleteNice intriguing tale - wished for a few more pages. Look forward to reading your stories regularly. Best wishes to you and plz convey my best regards to the Suls gang on FB. :-)
ReplyDeleteNice intriguing tale...wished for a few more pages. Look forward to reading your stories regularly.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes. Plz do convey my regards to the Suls gang on FB. :-)
that was beautifully written..Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteEngrossing, from the start till the very end. Such a beautifully written piece with so much love infused in the story. Brilliant writing, Ghazala :)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting Ghazala. I wish such things happen more often and people think beyond religion.
ReplyDeleteNice love story. Simply loved it...
ReplyDeleteGood to see a post after long... Nice story :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting story! you carried off so well :)
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